Hi, Ive written a MG fantasy book that is both fun and serious. The main character is able to transform anyone and anything but with wonky powers sometimes things go awry.

In the story she transforms her nemesis into a toad. She helps another child regain her eyesight and she turns rain to glitter. But there is a key part of the story where she transforms her nemesis, who is a cheerleader, and makes her fat. This leads to a whole world of hurt and takes them both on a journey of discovery.

Iím wondering if the fat transformation would be frowned upon ?

All insight and thoughts greatly appreciated.

Lunablue.