Just stopping by quickly to let you know that after following the advice of pretty much everyone on this forum to go through SYW, critique others' work, etc... I went back to my story hoping to catch a few things I could improve, only to realize that the 1st two pages of my 1st chapter are practically a big info-dump.

I re-read it so many times, and I never saw it before. So, yeah, you guys really know what you're talking about (not that I doubted it), and thank you!

Back to work!!