The first paragraph in the second chapter of WIP sort of came to me organically - it felt right... although the first sentence has a structure I've not tried before. I like the feel of it... but would appreciate comments.
By the way, this is just the first draft of the manuscript.
By the way, this is just the first draft of the manuscript.
In darkness, confusion. Huge sections of granite fell thunderously around him. “Rose,” Liam whispered, then reached out and found her hand seeking his.
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