Share the last line you wrote!
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“If I may,” Sawel said. He bent at the waist. When he straightened he sang, and Slate learned what awe meant.
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“They held one another and watched the star for the better part of the night.”
...which just so happens to be the LAST LINE OF THE LAST CHAPTER OF MY MANUSCRIPT, hell yeah baby! I have OFFICIALLY written my first (complete) novel
...which just so happens to be the LAST LINE OF THE LAST CHAPTER OF MY MANUSCRIPT, hell yeah baby! I have OFFICIALLY written my first (complete) novel
“They held one another and watched the star for the better part of the night.”
...which just so happens to be the LAST LINE OF THE LAST CHAPTER OF MY MANUSCRIPT, hell yeah baby! I have OFFICIALLY written my first (complete) novel
YOWZA!! Congratulations!
“Time,” Dan said. “Time heals.”
This is the last line of the first short story in my linked collection. One step closer.
This is the last line of the first short story in my linked collection. One step closer.
Hearty Congratulations!
It feels great, doesn't it? May your next message include the phrase "asked for the full manuscript".
“They held one another and watched the star for the better part of the night.”
...which just so happens to be the LAST LINE OF THE LAST CHAPTER OF MY MANUSCRIPT, hell yeah baby! I have OFFICIALLY written my first (complete) novel
It feels great, doesn't it? May your next message include the phrase "asked for the full manuscript".
Last line in the middle
I just added this to punch a plot jump:
The table prepared and ready, she reclined in the driver’s captain chair and thought about Chaz’s chest scars.
I just added this to punch a plot jump:
The table prepared and ready, she reclined in the driver’s captain chair and thought about Chaz’s chest scars.
The walls were grey and the floor was made of a white tile that reflected Eefie as a blur.
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JAS. See if you think that line would be more effective if you eliminated both the 'was made of' and the 'that'.
... grey, and white floor tiles reflected Eefie as a blur.
I assume it's not in Eefie's POV, but if it is, try 'her' instead of Eefie. May not work in context, but...
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The girl didn't look shy anymore. The confidence in her eyes scared me. "We think you should leave the Dollhouse when everyone else is falling asleep."
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If the wind direction was just right, and you put your head out the window, and there was no pollution that day, and it wasn’t raining, and no one had lit a scented candle anywhere in the neighbourhood, you could smell the salt water.
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Something rustled from the trees and a giant polar bear stood over (me).
Forgot to add "me" yesterday.
Forgot to add "me" yesterday.
“You…should have…done your…research,” Castor placed his hands on the wall to keep balance. “I’m a… Scaletile. They…don’t stay…paralyzed….for long.”
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So I sent him a kiss, or whatever they called it, and then we were meeting at a cool little bar in a city street I hadn’t been to since the dark ages.
(This thread is such a good motivator!)
(This thread is such a good motivator!)
The End.
It's the second time I've written that line in this book, but it will be the last. For sure.
It's the second time I've written that line in this book, but it will be the last. For sure.
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The historical: “Wagons hooooooooo!”
The crime thriller: “No, I’m not a good guy, but forcing myself on a woman is not my game, baby.”
The crime thriller: “No, I’m not a good guy, but forcing myself on a woman is not my game, baby.”
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