First post in years :)

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First post in a long time. Though I've lurked a bit. Title suggestion?


Yesterday,
Today... Even Now
Miles between us
Yet we feel it somehow.

Connection
In distance
Our long awaited
Temptation
Together we choose
Hope's seduction

Time
And days pass
But our moment
Will come at last

Can you feel it?
Our hands clutching
Our eyes locking
Our lips touching...
As our thoughts fight
Pleasure's invite

Wait for me...
For our meeting
We must take this chance given
I'll come for you
To accept our fate
Every day and the next will be our date.

14/01/2019 23:35
 

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Welcome back, Shane!

For a title, perhaps “To <name>“ - the poem includes no mention of the loved one’s details, or anything of the pair’s shared history. So addressing it to the person let’s the reader know it’s meant for them?
 

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Thank you. I'm glad you made that suggestion as I'm thinking of putting this in a card to someone who I've been taking online for a year due to distance!