Hi halion,

sorry I hadn't seen this. Yes, I ended up doing a bit of both, it was a 98% rewrite plus adding new stuff in between chapts (or, rather, making the ends less abrupt - sometimes by adding whole new scenes - which is what I think might have thrown the editors off). Anyways, I turned in the revised vision a few days ago. Now, fingers crossed - and if anything, I've learned a great deal by doing this!