So I am edging closer and closer to then end of my second draft! However I am again stuck on POV's. I try to use literary works I have read to answer my questions but sometimes I think its best to ask people.
I have a protagonist and his love interest travelling together. During this time the story is completely in the protagonists POV. Now in the 6th chapter she leaves him and the chapter is in her POV for the first time, which sheds light on why she is like she is. She only has one chapter of her POV till they reunite 4 chapters later. When there together it is solely in the protagonists POV again. Until they decide to split before the climax, so she can embark on her own quest which gives her 3 more chapter of POV up to the end. Does this sound okay or maybe too messy?
So the biggest concern is having her develop her own POV then go back to chapter where we don't know what shes thinking.
I have a protagonist and his love interest travelling together. During this time the story is completely in the protagonists POV. Now in the 6th chapter she leaves him and the chapter is in her POV for the first time, which sheds light on why she is like she is. She only has one chapter of her POV till they reunite 4 chapters later. When there together it is solely in the protagonists POV again. Until they decide to split before the climax, so she can embark on her own quest which gives her 3 more chapter of POV up to the end. Does this sound okay or maybe too messy?
So the biggest concern is having her develop her own POV then go back to chapter where we don't know what shes thinking.