Hello, Lane. Thank you for sharing your time with everyone. That is very generous!
Questions
1. For a debut author, if a prologue is absolutely necessary, and he/she includes one, is that a pass for you (or are you willing to look it over without prejudice)?
2. If a story is overdone, such as wizard school for young people, is this an immediate pass for you (or willing to look it over without prejudice)?
3. Do you recommend debut, fantasy writers choose MG over YA (for their first book); i.e. is the YA market oversaturated?
Thank you.
Hi Enlightened,
1. I'm not sure why a prologue would be "absolutely necessary", but a prologue isn't automatically a pass. Prologues have very specific jobs. Most prologues do not feature the protagonist, but take place before our story begins, and do not necessarily involve our story. For example. I recently read a thriller in which the prologue involved two baddies chasing down and shooting at a car. In the first chapter, our hero hears about this event through a fellow cop and assumes it's a random non-event (gangbangers, etc.). However, later on he learns those two baddies work for the baddie he's been hunting. So, our hero interrogates the two baddies from the prologue for info on his baddie.
The example prologue contains the typical tropes:
a. does not feature our protagonist
b. occurs before the story takes place
c. does not necessarily *directly* involve our story.
2. "Overdone" isn't a pass per se, because everything is overdone. My cousin, a big time writer in Hollywood, said there hasn't been a new idea in writing for 75 years. And that was 75 years ago. Harry Potter is not original, neither is Percy Jackson, or The Count of Monte Cristo. Obviously, some story had to come first, but according to Aristotle, in his
Poetics, there are really only two plots: Tragedy and Comedy.
We can then break those down into "man" vs. self, "man" vs nature, Golden Fleece, and dozens of different theories.
What's my point? Originality isn't original, it's how you tell the story.
3. Interesting question...I suggest you write the story you want to read. There's more to fantasy than YA or MG. Granted, YA fantasy is saturated, but so is every other genre. There's no magic formula. Writing to trends is dangerous, because the trends you see started two years ago.
Knowing the market is important, but writing something great should be your focus.
Hope this helps without being too verbose or disjointed!