Yesterday's Last Line

MinaJane · Jul 22, 2019

Maryn said:
Giving her puppy one last hard slap,

Oh, no, poor puppy! :e2cry:

JakeSTamer said:
Giving her ***** one last hard slap, she leaves her hand pushing against Vanya’s reddened warm skin, denying her lover her orgasm.

Giving her cheek one last hard slap, she leaves her hand pushing against Vanya’s reddened warm skin, denying her lover her orgasm.
Giving her uncle one last hard slap, she leaves her hand pushing against Vanya’s reddened warm skin, denying her lover her orgasm.
Giving her enemy one last hard slap, she leaves her hand pushing against Vanya’s reddened warm skin, denying her lover her orgasm.

Maryn · Jul 22, 2019

I especially like uncle. Boy, I bet he was surprised.

dangerousbill · Jul 31, 2019

Today's last line:

“Go call the police,” I told the caterer. I raised my voice. “Nobody leave. Nobody touch anything until the police get here. This is now a crime scene”

Also the last line of the whole novel.

DB

Maryn · Jul 31, 2019

I like that as a last line, Bill.

JakeSTamer · Aug 7, 2019

“That sounds like a good idea to me, we’ll have a fun relaxing day playing with him.”

Maryn · Aug 7, 2019

Nice to see the game continue!

JakeSTamer · Aug 7, 2019

When I have something new I like to post it. I've been editing it, so not a lot of new lines to post and I didn't write anything last week. I'm adding a sex scene so I should be posting more in here with asterisks.

Maryn · Aug 7, 2019

Ooooh, asterisks!

JakeSTamer · Aug 9, 2019

Two of the words are not dirty words, but it's less suggestive with them as asterisks.

Bending down she twirls her tongue over his **** before taking him in her *****, tasting him, letting his **** rub against the back of her ******.

Maryn · Aug 9, 2019

Bending down she twirls her tongue over his oboe before taking him in her class, tasting him, letting his reed rub against the back of her zither.

Maryn, waiting for Coddi to top this

JakeSTamer · Aug 9, 2019

Lol, I like it.

JakeSTamer · Aug 11, 2019

"He’s wanted to have *** with me for some time now, and I know he won’t try to harm either one of us."

Maryn · Aug 11, 2019

"He’s wanted to have tea with me for some time now, and I know he won’t try to harm either one of us."
"He’s wanted to have war with me for some time now, and I know he won’t try to harm either one of us."
"He’s wanted to have fun with me for some time now, and I know he won’t try to harm either one of us."
"He’s wanted to have CPR with me for some time now, and I know he won’t try to harm either one of us."
"He’s wanted to have gin with me for some time now, and I know he won’t try to harm either one of us."

JakeSTamer · Aug 12, 2019

Letting out a small giggle, they watch the questioning look on his face turn to surprised astonishment as he sees Heidi’s vines move, bringing one of his ****** vines up over his ****.

JakeSTamer · Aug 12, 2019

Maryn said:
"He’s wanted to have tea with me for some time now, and I know he won’t try to harm either one of us."
"He’s wanted to have war with me for some time now, and I know he won’t try to harm either one of us."
"He’s wanted to have fun with me for some time now, and I know he won’t try to harm either one of us."
"He’s wanted to have CPR with me for some time now, and I know he won’t try to harm either one of us."
"He’s wanted to have gin with me for some time now, and I know he won’t try to harm either one of us."

Those are great, I could replace the word with fun and still have the same meaning.

Maryn · Aug 12, 2019

Letting out a small giggle, they watch the questioning look on his face turn to surprised astonishment as he sees Heidi’s vines move, bringing one of his purple vines up over his meal.

I don't seem to be of the right mindset to do this justice today.

JakeSTamer · Aug 12, 2019

How did you know lol "over his meal" is exactly what's happening, and Heidi does have brown and light purple vines.

Maryn · Aug 13, 2019

Lucky guess is all. At least this time I didn't have to look for a list of four-letter nouns, like I do the worst days I attempt to play along.

JakeSTamer · Aug 14, 2019

I do the same thing sometimes, look for a list of how many letters the word is.

Petting one of Thor’s vine’s Arianna sweetly tells him, “That’s very nice of you to let Heidi go first, this will be the first time he’s tasted male ***.”

JakeSTamer · Aug 16, 2019

(*) is I don't have a name for him yet

(*) watches Heidi push his wet opening down over his **** ****, sucking his ***** inside his viney flesh.

JakeSTamer · Aug 19, 2019

Pushing his face harder onto her ***** as he cries out with muffled moaning.

Nadinarte · Aug 20, 2019

Her lips curled over his *******. Her big, green eyes met his and her long lashes spoke of an innocence that clashed with the wet sound of her slow, prolonged *******.

My sincere apologies. Is this acceptable?

Maryn · Aug 21, 2019

That line passes muster, in my opinion. Before I forget, thanks for being understanding about the need to delete inappropriate material where anyone could see it.

What I try to do when I'm posting in this thread is imagine a real thirteen-year-old like I see near the middle school. They're nothing like the actors playing thirteen-year-olds, who are really seventeen or twenty and mouthing lines written by people in their thirties. The real kids are children on the cusp of being young teens. The girls often have crazy long legs and no waists, haven't mastered how to dress, have unflattering hairstyles, braces, or glasses that will make them cringe in a few years, an utter lack of sophistication. They're naive but eager to appear far more experienced and jaded than they are, when many have zero experience with anything sexual, even kissing.

If it would be okay for them to see what I posted, then it's okay here.

Maryn, cute in her moderator hat (and an overprotective parent, her adult kids insist)

JakeSTamer · Aug 25, 2019

Grinning as he gasps, she says, “It looks like you’re ready for more.”

MinaJane · Aug 26, 2019

I come back from holiday to so many asterisks!! Awesome!! Thank you, Jake

JakeSTamer said:
Bending down she twirls her tongue over his **** before taking him in her *****, tasting him, letting his **** rub against the back of her ******.

Bending down she twirls her tongue over his cake before taking him in her purse, tasting him, letting his hair rub against the back of her mirror. whatever that would mean...

JakeSTamer said:
"He’s wanted to have *** with me for some time now, and I know he won’t try to harm either one of us."

"He’s wanted to have gym with me for some time now, and I know he won’t try to harm either one of us."

JakeSTamer said:
Letting out a small giggle, they watch the questioning look on his face turn to surprised astonishment as he sees Heidi’s vines move, bringing one of his ****** vines up over his ****.

Letting out a small giggle, they watch the questioning look on his face turn to surprised astonishment as he sees Heidi’s vines move, bringing one of his twenty vines up over his jury.

JakeSTamer said:
Petting one of Thor’s vine’s Arianna sweetly tells him, “That’s very nice of you to let Heidi go first, this will be the first time he’s tasted male ***.”

Petting one of Thor’s vine’s Arianna sweetly tells him, “That’s very nice of you to let Heidi go first, this will be the first time he’s tasted male fur.”

JakeSTamer said:
(*) watches Heidi push his wet opening down over his **** ****, sucking his ***** inside his viney flesh.

(*) watches Heidi push his wet opening down over his west door, sucking his cells inside his viney flesh.

JakeSTamer said:
Pushing his face harder onto her ***** as he cries out with muffled moaning.

Pushing his face harder onto her smoke as he cries out with muffled moaning.[/

Nadinarte said:
Her lips curled over his *******. Her big, green eyes met his and her long lashes spoke of an innocence that clashed with the wet sound of her slow, prolonged *******.

Her lips curled over his burglar. Her big, green eyes met his and her long lashes spoke of an innocence that clashed with the wet sound of her slow, prolonged decline.

:snoopy:

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