Yesterday's Last Line
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You're welcome MinaJane, and thank you those were wonderful.
Needs rewritten, but it's the last thing I wrote.
Grinning hearing her gasp at her touch while feeling (*)’s hard **** slide against her fingers as he **** it into her lover.
Needs rewritten, but it's the last thing I wrote.
Grinning hearing her gasp at her touch while feeling (*)’s hard **** slide against her fingers as he **** it into her lover.
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Thanks! I'm so happy to be back!
Grinning hearing her gasp at her touch while feeling (*)’s hard foot slide against her fingers as he rams it into her lover.
Grinning hearing her gasp at her touch while feeling (*)’s hard fish slide against her fingers as he ties it into her lover.
Grinning hearing her gasp at her touch while feeling (*)’s hard inch slide against her fingers as he adds it into her lover.
Nibbling on Arianna’s ear, loving the sound of her quivering breath, Mindy slowly slides her right-hand down Arianna’s back.
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Yes, very nice line, Jake 
I've dived back into my revisions
, so here's my last line:
“The hot water ran out,” I mumble.
Adrian looks at me with wide eyes, shakes his head and turns around. “******* perfect.”
I've dived back into my revisions
, so here's my last line:“The hot water ran out,” I mumble.
Adrian looks at me with wide eyes, shakes his head and turns around. “******* perfect.”
Asterisks! Let's all play.
“The hot water ran out,” I mumble.
Adrian looks at me with wide eyes, shakes his head and turns around. “Picture perfect.”
“The hot water ran out,” I mumble.
Adrian looks at me with wide eyes, shakes his head and turns around. “Picture perfect.”
Maryn, MinaJane thank you.
“The hot water ran out,” I mumble.
Adrian looks at me with wide eyes, shakes his head and turns around. “cupcake perfect.”
“The hot water ran out,” I mumble.
Adrian looks at me with wide eyes, shakes his head and turns around. “cupcake perfect.”
With blood dripping onto the floor, they listen to his muffled screams, as she hands the knife to Arianna.
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Handing the knife to Kim, she tells her, “Along the bottom of his ribs, make the same cut that I did.”
Mindy watches his body jerk, his eye’s bulge out as tears and sweat roll down his face that’s twisted in agony as she hears the crack of another rib breaking over his muffled screams.
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Neither of those options is appropriate in the current context so I turn around and lock myself in my room.
I didn't get a lot done sense yesterday.
Greg shaking and continuing to scream, they grab holed of his broken ribs pulling them out and over until they crack in the front and stay open, exposing the back of his chest cavity.
Greg shaking and continuing to scream, they grab holed of his broken ribs pulling them out and over until they crack in the front and stay open, exposing the back of his chest cavity.
(Sorry not to be playing along, but I'm packing. Yesterday we nearly finished the garage, which was awful. Today, we begin the basement!)
That's ok, there's not a lot of new stuff from me ether. I'm editing and revising again right now. Glad you're getting a lot of packing done.
Taking a ****** in each hand she cups her hands around them, gently sliding her fingers over her smooth skin, grinning as she sees the faint flickering light form on the other side of the bed.
Taking a family in each hand she cups her hands around them, gently sliding her fingers over her smooth skin, grinning as she sees the faint flickering light form on the other side of the bed.
No?
Taking a killer in each hand she cups her hands around them, gently sliding her fingers over her smooth skin, grinning as she sees the faint flickering light form on the other side of the bed.
Maryn, sure killers take excellent care of their skin
No?
Taking a killer in each hand she cups her hands around them, gently sliding her fingers over her smooth skin, grinning as she sees the faint flickering light form on the other side of the bed.
Maryn, sure killers take excellent care of their skin
Lol, family and killers. She could be a killer, my characters just took her to feed off her sexual energy.
Devoid of all context...
“For one thing, you’re ****** and you’re going to drive like an *******. I don’t want Augie Garcia at my door with his hat in his hands.”
“For one thing, you’re ****** and you’re going to drive like an *******. I don’t want Augie Garcia at my door with his hat in his hands.”
“For one thing, you’re scuzzy and you’re going to drive like an helldog. I don’t want Augie Garcia at my door with his hat in his hands.”
*waves at Maryn*
hi hi hi!
He looks up at me with—confusion? Something like that, far removed from lust.
He looks up at me with—spaghetti? Something like that, far removed from lust.
He looks up at me with—squeaking? Something like that, far removed from lust.
hi hi hi!
He looks up at me with—confusion? Something like that, far removed from lust.
He looks up at me with—spaghetti? Something like that, far removed from lust.
He looks up at me with—squeaking? Something like that, far removed from lust.