Hello all,
I just finished my 30,000 word novella, and am interested in a critique of the first chapter. It is about 3000 words, and I am willing to read something of about the same length and offer my thoughts on it.
If interested, send me a PM here.
Please see below for the first three sentences. The story’s title is BUTCHERS, and the genre is horror fiction.
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Tonight, Min Gun brought his butchering tools.
He clung to the surface of a rough brick wall five stories up. A bone saw attached to his belt by a thin chain swayed gently in the autumn breeze.
I just finished my 30,000 word novella, and am interested in a critique of the first chapter. It is about 3000 words, and I am willing to read something of about the same length and offer my thoughts on it.
If interested, send me a PM here.
Please see below for the first three sentences. The story’s title is BUTCHERS, and the genre is horror fiction.
***
Tonight, Min Gun brought his butchering tools.
He clung to the surface of a rough brick wall five stories up. A bone saw attached to his belt by a thin chain swayed gently in the autumn breeze.