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Excerpt/Chapter Critique Swap

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Denevius

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Hello all,

I just finished my 30,000 word novella, and am interested in a critique of the first chapter. It is about 3000 words, and I am willing to read something of about the same length and offer my thoughts on it.

If interested, send me a PM here.

Please see below for the first three sentences. The story’s title is BUTCHERS, and the genre is horror fiction.

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Tonight, Min Gun brought his butchering tools.

He clung to the surface of a rough brick wall five stories up. A bone saw attached to his belt by a thin chain swayed gently in the autumn breeze.
 

JosephHarris

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Hey, are you still looking to excerpt swap? I'm currently working on a low fantasy project and looking to trade chapters for critique.
 
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