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I'm just wondering what people think about writing narration (specifically third person) as if it is the internal monologue of the character. For example, I'll interrupt the narration if the character's thoughts are interrupted like:
He was looking across the field when he saw-
"Hey! What are you doing here?"
I have a writing partner that hates it when I do this, but I'm positive I've seen it before. Only, I think I saw it in a Murakami book and that's far from normal writing. What do you guys think? Is this a thing?
He was looking across the field when he saw-
"Hey! What are you doing here?"
I have a writing partner that hates it when I do this, but I'm positive I've seen it before. Only, I think I saw it in a Murakami book and that's far from normal writing. What do you guys think? Is this a thing?