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I'm only going to have one jump scare, it's in the middle of the book. It's not a critical scene but it adds to the atmosphere.
What I did was:
1. Described an creepy abandoned building.
2. Two of the group decide to check it out.
3. They open the door.
4. An owl flies out.
5. After the scare they laugh cause it was just an owl.
I tried to use short choppy sentences during the action, detailing the feathers and the buffeting of wings, but It's not "jump scary" enough when I read it. I'm sure Dean Koontz would know how to handle it but I'm no Koontz.
What I did was:
1. Described an creepy abandoned building.
2. Two of the group decide to check it out.
3. They open the door.
4. An owl flies out.
5. After the scare they laugh cause it was just an owl.
I tried to use short choppy sentences during the action, detailing the feathers and the buffeting of wings, but It's not "jump scary" enough when I read it. I'm sure Dean Koontz would know how to handle it but I'm no Koontz.