Alright, so I know I'm on my first draft, and I know bad prose can be polished in later drafts, but I've struck a patch where my sentences don't just plod and sound robotic, they're shite. It's utterly disheartening, especially as I have hit one of my big target turning point scenes, which I have had in mind for ages. I'm not expecting to turn out Hemingway quality, but my current stuff is making my progress stall and leading me to fiddle.
Honestly, in retrospect, I think I just need to get this off my chest. Thanks for reading.
Honestly, in retrospect, I think I just need to get this off my chest. Thanks for reading.