New humorous thiller looking for feedback please

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This cover is the second book in a series of completely zany over-the-top humorous thrillers. (The first book was Oops-A-Navy, which was posted in this forum previously.) Thank you!

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The teal-orange opposites work okay here, relieved by the white title and author name.

Can I suggest the tiny text gets resized, e.g.

gcALR10.jpg


Easier to paint a picture than have to explain it in 1,000 words...

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A good series feel.

Great! Thanks Kevin!

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The teal-orange opposites work okay here, relieved by the white title and author name.

Can I suggest the tiny text gets resized, e.g.

gcALR10.jpg


Easier to paint a picture than have to explain it in 1,000 words...

-Derek


Thanks Derek. Appreciate it.
 

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Nicely done! It definitely looks part of a series with 'Oops-a-Navy!', couldn't miss it, on a shelf or in a thumbnail on a screen. (And, nice quick turn-around on the second book.)