Swapped WIPs. The previous one was a novel that had been published then the publisher folded. I had thought to revive it and shop it around, but the folks here pointed out I would have a better chance leading with a new unpublished WIP and the previously published one could be discussed later.
He stayed on his side of the bed, as he had every night since Mary Beth had stopped creeping over the center line to test the waters of his receptivity, and as he had every night since she had moved out of the bedroom to the guest room in those awful months before she left completely and for good.
A chill wind coming off the mountains—and a decided lack of blankets—necessitated a small fire set at the bottom of the deepest pit Gev could dig with his bare hands.
Just as I’d expected, there were certain cliques amongst the seven or eight people at the bar, and, as usual, at least one rude woman—this one scowling at me with her over-processed, fried, blonde hair and fake orange tan.
At the time she hadn’t wanted to admit it (to Jeganna or herself) but there was something about Billie that put butterflies in her stomach and a beat in her heart.
Ten minutes later, a total of 7 of us were loaded up in a tiny car, squished like sardines in a can—with Sherry driving, a friend of Jane’s—zipping around Cabo in the dark.
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