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"When they reached home he clung to her as Saiqa was holding a hanger in her hand. She dragged him towards her and struck him which Aabroo took on her wrist. She pushed her away and took him in her room and locked it from the inside."
Is it grammatically correct?
In the last line I want to say it's Saiqa who pushed Abroo away but I am confused as it may sound the other way around too?
The room is used by both mom and son. Should I use 'the' room instead of 'her' room in the last line?
Thanks
Is it grammatically correct?
In the last line I want to say it's Saiqa who pushed Abroo away but I am confused as it may sound the other way around too?
The room is used by both mom and son. Should I use 'the' room instead of 'her' room in the last line?
Thanks
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