I'm turning to traditional publishing after a while of trying to make self-publishing work. I've send several queries over the past month, and have yet to receive a reply.
The way I've structured my emails so far is to start with a short introduction along the lines of:
I then follow with the blurb text, and then an excerpt or synopsis if requested in the agent's guidelines.
Should I just open with "Dear Mr/Ms X" and then jump straight to the blurb? Does a typical agent blow through query emails fast enough that I need to shave these kinds of pleasantries away?
The way I've structured my emails so far is to start with a short introduction along the lines of:
Dear Mr/Ms. X. My name is Eli Freysson, and I am an Icelandic SFF author. I've self-published two series on Amazon, but have come to accept that I have no talent for marketing. So I'm turning to traditional publishing. I'm hoping to interest you in the latest in my new trilogy.
I then follow with the blurb text, and then an excerpt or synopsis if requested in the agent's guidelines.
Should I just open with "Dear Mr/Ms X" and then jump straight to the blurb? Does a typical agent blow through query emails fast enough that I need to shave these kinds of pleasantries away?