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When I was about halfway through my current manuscript, I noticed that I have no consistency with my dialogue tags. Sometimes I use
"blah blah," said Bob -- [Verb] then [Name]
and other times I use
"blah blah," Bob said -- [Name] then [Verb]
I can't explain why, but sometimes one feels more natural than the other in the given context, so I left everything as it was and made a note to figure things out later. Cut to now (later). I tried to Google this issue but didn't see much out there. I cracked open a handful of books, and almost all use [Name] then [Verb]. A couple use [Verb] then [Name], and one (Grapes of Wrath) is all over the place without any discernible pattern.
My question is, should this be something to worry about, particularly if I'm looking to eventually submit to an agent/editor?
"blah blah," said Bob -- [Verb] then [Name]
and other times I use
"blah blah," Bob said -- [Name] then [Verb]
I can't explain why, but sometimes one feels more natural than the other in the given context, so I left everything as it was and made a note to figure things out later. Cut to now (later). I tried to Google this issue but didn't see much out there. I cracked open a handful of books, and almost all use [Name] then [Verb]. A couple use [Verb] then [Name], and one (Grapes of Wrath) is all over the place without any discernible pattern.
My question is, should this be something to worry about, particularly if I'm looking to eventually submit to an agent/editor?