Is this sentence in error:
Walter’s vision was snow, there was a dull pain coming from behind his eyes, and a sticky heat that clung to his torso.
I don't see many people using lists of clauses separated by commas with a final conjoining "and," but as far as I know it's correct. Is it, or should it read:
Walter’s vision was snow. There was a dull pain coming from behind his eyes, and a sticky heat that clung to his torso.
(bonus points can you use ":?" at the end of a sentence?)
Walter’s vision was snow, there was a dull pain coming from behind his eyes, and a sticky heat that clung to his torso.
I don't see many people using lists of clauses separated by commas with a final conjoining "and," but as far as I know it's correct. Is it, or should it read:
Walter’s vision was snow. There was a dull pain coming from behind his eyes, and a sticky heat that clung to his torso.
(bonus points can you use ":?" at the end of a sentence?)