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Ok, I have a bizarre question.
In my story I have a chapter earlier where two characters are talking and they discuss a problem with another two characters. Later I have a chapter with those other two characters and their problem. Well, I'm rewriting it to start a little earlier at the beginning of their problem. Should I then begin the chapter with something like: 3 Hours Ago or other such reference, or would you just expect a reader to follow along? To break it up to flow in chronicle order doesn't feel like it will work.
In my story I have a chapter earlier where two characters are talking and they discuss a problem with another two characters. Later I have a chapter with those other two characters and their problem. Well, I'm rewriting it to start a little earlier at the beginning of their problem. Should I then begin the chapter with something like: 3 Hours Ago or other such reference, or would you just expect a reader to follow along? To break it up to flow in chronicle order doesn't feel like it will work.