I set a new personal record today — sent out an agent query at 9:43pm last night, and got a form rejection at 10:38am today.

I’ve been tweaking my query on this one for about 2 months, and obviously it needs more work.

I’m told you can put it up here for critique once you’ve hit 50 posts, so eventually I may get there. Until then, if anyone else has a quicker agent-query smack-down (or anything similar to “commiserate” over) I’d love to hear it.