I've heard that the main character needs to drive the plot through making choices.
I've heard the main character needs to be flawed, and make mistakes.
So, one of my leads makes decisions and I think each one is clear as an active choice on his part. Some of them are bad choices, and he suffers the consequences. So I thought i had done all of that choices/consequences thing 'right.'
I'm facing the situation now that some professional feedback says I am treating him like a 'whipping boy' (not my words). So - I wonder if there's a pacing issue with his difficulties in the first quarter of the book.
Are there guidelines about the degree of success a character should have up front? Like maybe the first few choices he makes should result in success, to establish his competence. (Some people don't like him as much as I think he deserves, too, and that might be part of the problem, but I'm working on his likability (still.))
Any thoughts about this are so so helpful to me....
I've heard the main character needs to be flawed, and make mistakes.
So, one of my leads makes decisions and I think each one is clear as an active choice on his part. Some of them are bad choices, and he suffers the consequences. So I thought i had done all of that choices/consequences thing 'right.'
I'm facing the situation now that some professional feedback says I am treating him like a 'whipping boy' (not my words). So - I wonder if there's a pacing issue with his difficulties in the first quarter of the book.
Are there guidelines about the degree of success a character should have up front? Like maybe the first few choices he makes should result in success, to establish his competence. (Some people don't like him as much as I think he deserves, too, and that might be part of the problem, but I'm working on his likability (still.))
Any thoughts about this are so so helpful to me....
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