Sketch in Low Light

William Haskins

William Haskins

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She's an amateur
existentialist,

a mentalist,
a gymnast

bending sin into
her temperance,

penance not in the
conventional sense,

she makes no mention
of redemption.
 
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As usual, the skill of your writing makes the reading easy. This is crafted very well (as I'm sure you know).
But my favorite part of it is that it is vaguely familiar, like I maybe know her, but I can't really tell, and so the title is exactly right.
 
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But this one, a bit surprising/amusing to me. . . so glad you are still the fine poet I always knew you were. xoxox
 
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