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Gillhoughly - What if the books that inspired me are old, and unpublishable today?
Those are the best kind! I love the tempest in a teapot stories of Mapp and Lucia by E.F. Benson, which would be rejected, I'm sure, by today's market. The writing is superb, sneaks up on you. I think suspense romance writer Mary Stewart would be told to make her heroines sexually aggressive and to patch in nookie scenes, but her works are word-art as-is. My favorite Pulitzer winner, A Confederacy of Dunces might get sold in today's market, but some dolt in editing would insist on making the oddball main character "likeable" -- which would destroy the book. He's sort of likeable, but in a train wreck kind of way; you're too fascinated by his antics to put the book down.
The books that inspire you? Hold them close and dip in when you need a battery recharge.
As for your specific issue on making the protag likeable, I had the same issue with my first book. He was in a dire situation, getting into his backstory could come later, and I bled heart's blood making that first chapter shine. But one of the many editors who rejected it was kind enough to scribble "I don't feel any sympathy for this hero."
**I** had plenty of sympathy for him, but forgot that a cold reader can go only by what's on the page, not what's in my head. I added a line to let the reader know he was scared, as in breath-catching terrified. Next time out, it sold. After that, I made sure to have characters share their emotions with the readers. A tweak here and there may be all you need. I'm not "in yer face" with emotions, but it's enough to haul readers in.
Some writers have irritated me by avoiding the exploration of a character's emotions. I love this one guy's work, still do, but time and again he did not explore a character's emotions. Even one line of reaction would have been enough, but he held his distance.
Some writers are afraid to get "emotionally naked" through their characters. It means they'd have to spill their own emotions onto a page and they don't want readers (or family / friends) to know what they've been through in life. They hold it in. They may be unaware of doing it, too.
Others, and I love them, rip off the clothes and go streaking.
I don't have much good to say about many current market writers, either, but now and then there is a gem in the crowd.
This is one more reason self-publish looks good. I suspect I am aiming for something that in the end doesn't matter anyway!)
Sounds like a plan. I'm doing that for a number of projects that I know most publishers would turn down!
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