1. I thought I had made my protagonist likable, but just got a few comments back ... and he isn't, not yet. Are there simple tips on this? I know the 'pet the dog' trick. Should I make sure, for example, that one of the other characters likes him in some way in order for the reader to like him? (at the moment it's all conflict in chapter 1). I can also add more self reflection, more thought/reaction from my character - I am guessing this is a good way to make him relatable? I thought I had enough, but maybe I need more. Any specific suggestions here on increasing likability would be great...
2. I have comments from a single reader that there is too much going on ... and not enough going on at the same time. The reader understands this is counterintuitive. I'm trying to understand how else to think about the feedback so that I can address it. Here's the situation in the story: The protagonist suffers a number of conflicts up front - first interpersonal with family and others, then physical conflicts with the elements. But my reader thinks that despite all these conflicts and incidents, there is 'not much happening.' So - I'm wondering if this is related to #1. In other words, if the character was more relatable would these events feel like 'more is going on'? Does my thought process make sense?
And my reader is encouraging me toward a more literary style. In general, do folks fall into stories with that sort of style more easily? (think: a little more flowery, maybe voicier, longer sentences, beautiful prose) . . . I think I need to be very careful on this one, as I can see botching it horribly. I also really disliked the book that my reader suggested as an inspiration, couldn't finish it, horribly long sentences that I wanted to take a weedwhacker to. But, maybe my brain is the wrong brain here.
Any thoughts?
2. I have comments from a single reader that there is too much going on ... and not enough going on at the same time. The reader understands this is counterintuitive. I'm trying to understand how else to think about the feedback so that I can address it. Here's the situation in the story: The protagonist suffers a number of conflicts up front - first interpersonal with family and others, then physical conflicts with the elements. But my reader thinks that despite all these conflicts and incidents, there is 'not much happening.' So - I'm wondering if this is related to #1. In other words, if the character was more relatable would these events feel like 'more is going on'? Does my thought process make sense?
And my reader is encouraging me toward a more literary style. In general, do folks fall into stories with that sort of style more easily? (think: a little more flowery, maybe voicier, longer sentences, beautiful prose) . . . I think I need to be very careful on this one, as I can see botching it horribly. I also really disliked the book that my reader suggested as an inspiration, couldn't finish it, horribly long sentences that I wanted to take a weedwhacker to. But, maybe my brain is the wrong brain here.
Any thoughts?
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