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Thread: [Closed] Beta Swap for first 5K of 80K YA Science Fiction

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    [Closed] Beta Swap for first 5K of 80K YA Science Fiction

    Closed. Thank you for your interest.

    Hey AWers,

    I am looking for 2 people who are interested in swapping the first 5K. Please PM if you're interested.

    I am flexible when it comes to your genre or audience. My strength lies in clarity and making sentences flow better. LBL or general comments are both fine.

    Link to query. Still WIP. Click here.
    Link to a previous version of the first 2K. This has been revised. Click here.

    The good folk at SYW identified major syntax issues, including filtering and overexplanation. I'd like to know if there are any other errors in the first 5K. Because that's going to carry over to the next 75K.

    If you like what you read, send me a PM, and we'll take it step-by-step.

    Thank you,
    Last edited by inksplatter; 06-01-2018 at 05:56 AM.

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