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So, I know that generally you change paragraphs whenever you change which character is speaking or acting. But what about when you have two different characters acting within the same sentence? Something like
Ella tried to grab the blade, but Leah dodged out of the way.
Does this go at the end of Ella's paragraph, the beginning of Leah's paragraph, one of its own, or if the action is fast-paced enough, is it okay to include a number of different actors in one paragraph?
Ella tried to grab the blade, but Leah dodged out of the way.
Does this go at the end of Ella's paragraph, the beginning of Leah's paragraph, one of its own, or if the action is fast-paced enough, is it okay to include a number of different actors in one paragraph?