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Good morning, this is my first post so if I've missed a thread that already deals with this, I apologize! I've spent most of my time writing non-fiction (mostly blogs for a seminary), but for the past four years I've been working on a lengthy standalone novel. As of right now it's at roughly 160,000 words (i'm about 3/4 of the way finished) and deals with multiple character pov's. It's written in a mixture of third person limited and an omnipresent third-person narrative (It's a bit of a mess, and I wasn't really aware of the rules when I started). However, I've recently realized the confusion of this and how much "head hopping" i've been doing. Because of that, my taste has been changing to limited third-person narration, using only one pov at a time per scene. So I've undertaken the task of rewriting my novel to fit that narration. It's not as difficult as it sounds since I basically followed that principle anyway (minus the head hopping and occasional "narrators voice" breaking in), but I am struggling with descriptions. For example, one of my characters is only nine years old. I know to describe the setting by showing it through his perspective, but should I filter it to the way he would understand it? In other words, should I describe certain settings using words that are bigger than he would use, or should I keep it simple so that his scene has a distinct feel? I'm afraid if I go too far with this, each scene will sound like a different book, but if I don't do it at all, each scene will sound the same and the characters might come off as bland. Any suggestions would be great! Thank you!
Ian
Ian