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Hi everybody!
One of the comments was that my characters are not deep enough. My protagonist has a distinguishable character, traits, and one big goal (a dream), but the comment I got was "I didn't get a feeling that I know him very well, despite his traits".
What does it mean? How can I improve this? Is there a good writing book I can read that might help?
Thanks in advance!
One of the comments was that my characters are not deep enough. My protagonist has a distinguishable character, traits, and one big goal (a dream), but the comment I got was "I didn't get a feeling that I know him very well, despite his traits".
What does it mean? How can I improve this? Is there a good writing book I can read that might help?
Thanks in advance!