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I remember the very first crit I got. I was 15 and I emailed my 200k-word SF doorstop to a friend. She said it was exciting, but the characters didn't seem real.
I've queried 3 times now since 2014. I've gotten a lot of responses like, "good concept, well-executed, didn't connect with the characters."
I've put up flash fiction in the SF Share Your Work section here, and I get responses like, "beautifully written, exciting, didn't connect with the characters."
I've read Orson Scott Card's book Characters and Viewpoint. I've read The Emotional Craft of Fiction by Donald Maass.
I've had one "real" short story published. One time when I didn't hear, "didn't connect with the characters." Maybe I created a connectable character here? What do you think? What am I doing "right" in this story? https://pankmagazine.com/piece/the-kaleidoscope-kid/
I feel *a lot* for my characters. Their stories are super emotional to me. I don't understand how no one feels that way except me. I thought I knew how to place the reader in someone's shoes, but all the evidence (except that story above) points to the contrary.
I hope I'm not a cold person. I don't understand what I'm doing wrong.
1) Can anyone point me toward resources in this area?
2) And/or, what techniques do you use to create empathic characters?
I've queried 3 times now since 2014. I've gotten a lot of responses like, "good concept, well-executed, didn't connect with the characters."
I've put up flash fiction in the SF Share Your Work section here, and I get responses like, "beautifully written, exciting, didn't connect with the characters."
I've read Orson Scott Card's book Characters and Viewpoint. I've read The Emotional Craft of Fiction by Donald Maass.
I've had one "real" short story published. One time when I didn't hear, "didn't connect with the characters." Maybe I created a connectable character here? What do you think? What am I doing "right" in this story? https://pankmagazine.com/piece/the-kaleidoscope-kid/
I feel *a lot* for my characters. Their stories are super emotional to me. I don't understand how no one feels that way except me. I thought I knew how to place the reader in someone's shoes, but all the evidence (except that story above) points to the contrary.
I hope I'm not a cold person. I don't understand what I'm doing wrong.
1) Can anyone point me toward resources in this area?
2) And/or, what techniques do you use to create empathic characters?
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