I am writing all of the character in 3rd person. The problem is that as soon as I leave the main character I obviously have to go to another character. The external circumstances are out of the main character's contol and impact his solo journey.
I am left with seven characters that need a tight POV to tell the story. I have heard that too many characters with tight "in the skin" POV is frowned upon by publishers. Does anyone know if this is true and how do I overcome this problem.
For example, a character is abducted. She has zero relation to the main character and is part of a subplot that ultimately impacts the main character but not until the end. We must feel her emotions to understand what she is going through. Planning her abduction "the bad guy" the story reads so much better seeing the planning through his eyes feeling what he is feeling. The governor is another character. A foe blackmails him with decisions he made years eariler. He POV is needed as well. The president is the vilian and his POV is needed to push the story. An undocument citizen is facing deportation his POV is needed. Way too many characters right?
Totally lost. Any help would be greatly appreciated.
I am left with seven characters that need a tight POV to tell the story. I have heard that too many characters with tight "in the skin" POV is frowned upon by publishers. Does anyone know if this is true and how do I overcome this problem.
For example, a character is abducted. She has zero relation to the main character and is part of a subplot that ultimately impacts the main character but not until the end. We must feel her emotions to understand what she is going through. Planning her abduction "the bad guy" the story reads so much better seeing the planning through his eyes feeling what he is feeling. The governor is another character. A foe blackmails him with decisions he made years eariler. He POV is needed as well. The president is the vilian and his POV is needed to push the story. An undocument citizen is facing deportation his POV is needed. Way too many characters right?
Totally lost. Any help would be greatly appreciated.