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Hi guys!
So in 2017 I challenged myself to write something everyday for a whole year.
This resulted in 365 little pieces of text and about 250 drawings, but I have no idea how to evaluate myself if it is any good to bring into the world.
Any suggestions how to go about it?
Here are some of the texts (I don't dare to call the poems really):
centre stage
You marked me carelessly.
My biggest fear personified.
My will will carry my vociferous voice
Until the storms calm down
And I can rest in silence.
---
waterfalls
Weep into my hand
Cascade between my fingers
Don’t stop before my hands form lakes
And fish swim within.
---
tippy toes
You tread
So lightly
On the floor.
As if you were afraid to upset the earth.
Looking at you,
Hovering,
I wished
My heart would be as light
As your steps
One time.
---
hot air balloon
I was unforgotten she said.
Her heart left hollow in absence
To be rooted
But she didn’t long for earth
She needed air to root in.
---
unique
She laid her heart in my arms
And asked me to rock it
Gently.
“I only have one.”
---
carefree
Time is irresponsible
I have seen people fade, loose their blossom,
before spring
And others bloomed through the cracks of
winter.
---
denial
I minimize you
Just to deny
I need you like the sun.
---
masks off
Faceless
Like a soldier
treading for the next trench
He clings to the memory of his mother’s
cooking.
To be blown to shreds in a moment
‘Hit the ground, boy.’
---
Aegis
Ravenous individualism
Pursuits reflections
To grasp its own security.
---
Icarus
‘Dare not to fly.’
The bird said to the man.
‘This is where I live.’
Thank you for reading! Any help is much appreciated!
Also, haven't figured out a good way to link the drawings, sorry!
So in 2017 I challenged myself to write something everyday for a whole year.
This resulted in 365 little pieces of text and about 250 drawings, but I have no idea how to evaluate myself if it is any good to bring into the world.
Any suggestions how to go about it?
Here are some of the texts (I don't dare to call the poems really):
centre stage
You marked me carelessly.
My biggest fear personified.
My will will carry my vociferous voice
Until the storms calm down
And I can rest in silence.
---
waterfalls
Weep into my hand
Cascade between my fingers
Don’t stop before my hands form lakes
And fish swim within.
---
tippy toes
You tread
So lightly
On the floor.
As if you were afraid to upset the earth.
Looking at you,
Hovering,
I wished
My heart would be as light
As your steps
One time.
---
hot air balloon
I was unforgotten she said.
Her heart left hollow in absence
To be rooted
But she didn’t long for earth
She needed air to root in.
---
unique
She laid her heart in my arms
And asked me to rock it
Gently.
“I only have one.”
---
carefree
Time is irresponsible
I have seen people fade, loose their blossom,
before spring
And others bloomed through the cracks of
winter.
---
denial
I minimize you
Just to deny
I need you like the sun.
---
masks off
Faceless
Like a soldier
treading for the next trench
He clings to the memory of his mother’s
cooking.
To be blown to shreds in a moment
‘Hit the ground, boy.’
---
Aegis
Ravenous individualism
Pursuits reflections
To grasp its own security.
---
Icarus
‘Dare not to fly.’
The bird said to the man.
‘This is where I live.’
Thank you for reading! Any help is much appreciated!
Also, haven't figured out a good way to link the drawings, sorry!