Quote Originally Posted by The Urban Spaceman View Post

(For the record, I do actually like the description vapes like a steam train. It's evocative and witty with its metaphor, and if you just tossed that in to a story as an aspect of somebody's personality, I wouldn't mind and probably wouldn't even question it. But the list o' stuff just reads like a grocery list
Haha thanks for the compliment. I probably should have led with something interesting like that, as my original list is admittedly bland