I'm in final edits. Three times my characters are having a heated discussion when they turn around and a person involved in what they are talking about is standing there.
I'm sure readers will notice. But all three fit in the scenes. Help, I need an alternative.
Here's the third:
The other two incidents are very similar. Surely there has to be more ways writers can present a similar situation than this one.
Thank you all in advance whether you can help me or not.
I'm sure readers will notice. But all three fit in the scenes. Help, I need an alternative.
Here's the third:
“And now I’m supposed to understand what Mark went through?”
Mom was staring behind me toward the door. I turned. Mark was standing there.
The other two incidents are very similar. Surely there has to be more ways writers can present a similar situation than this one.
Thank you all in advance whether you can help me or not.