Quote Originally Posted by evangaline View Post
I always seem to find myself in a punctuation quagmire! The MC is thinking the following:

There was a fine line between a Fuck you, you think you’re so funny pissed off Sharon and a Fuck you, I’m out of here pissed off Sharon. He could deal with the first. He couldn't live with the second.

Are the italics okay and should there be any punctuation after each statement? Thanks guys!
Not italics, nor quotes if it's not actually spoken. How about em-dashes to separate them?