The way the image is set up is creating a bit of a conflict. It seems that the chair is supposed to be providing some kind of break between "I love I kill" and the two "You"s, but with the change in colour it isn't really necessary. It somewhat splits the whole thing into two columns, and we read columns separately so it takes a moment to realise the title isn't "I love I kill". Making the images perspectively more comfortable will help this, but I would also be careful about the colour change in the sentence. The repetition of you is enough to make it distinct, you might consider improving it grammatically too: i.e. "I love you, I kill you".
The sans-serif type needs a lot more space, in tracking and leading. It's far too tight and it's accentuating the weird split of the cover, not helped by the fact that "I kill" - which is centred with "I love" - has very little relationship with is corresponding "you". The use of Bebas (or a relevant clone) is fine, it just needs a bit more room to breathe. Similarly, the use of Trajan(?), I'd take that down a weight. Trajan looks beautiful, but Trajan bold is a bit wank. If it were me, I'd set the author name normally (Gregg Bell, not GREGG BELL) to create a better dynamic between title and author. Goudy Oldstyle is a great alternative for Trajan, which has no lower case.
The bare bones are there, it just needs to be restructured and greater care given to type.