She of Another Dimension

William Haskins

William Haskins

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There's chaos in
her silhouette,
a storm concealed,
compressed until
it vanishes from
the human eye
to rage in the
shadows of shadows.
 
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Nice, William.

Thank you for posting another poem. I look forward to reading the poetry you offer us. It's like a person fighting death by thirst in the desert finding a little stream of water.
:)
 
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Only recently did I encounter the idea of one-sentence (but multi-line) poems. I like the image this one accomplishes, William.
 
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Lovely imagery and forced me to reread 10-12 times without quite​ figuring it out. Which is awesome.
 
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