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August 2020 edit: the newest iteration of this thread is here, enjoy.
This can be seen as a continuation of the Post the First Three Sentences of your Novel thread in Novels forum, which you should take a peek at because amerigina lays out the rules pretty well in the 1st post.
You're invited to post the first 3 sentences of your WIP here for critique.*
I like amergina's take on what such a writing sample might consist of:
Re-read that quote, and see if you can tinker with your darling opening lines to improve them before you post. Take your time, this isn't a race. If they're already perfect then that's great!
By posting, you're inviting readers to critique your writing sample. That means they will say what they think. You might not receive the deafening applause you're expecting so wear your adult panties, please. And remember the immortal words of Conan: That which does not kill us, makes us stronger.
Readers/critiquers, take it easy, this is not a Viking raid. Yes I know you're trying to help but there are diplomatic alternatives to being so helpy that the author feels they're being bludgeoned to death. Try to remember you were a sensitive soul yourself, once.
Have fun -- "fun" being the keyword here.
* An addendum to cover posting samples from works that have already been published. This came up in Page 24 of this thread. If you're doing this, please make sure readers know the lines are from a published work. I personally would have an expectation that author might be willing to update said published work (if possible) should readers deliver some zing suggestions, but that's just me, clearly it's the author's decision. But maybe this could also be made clear (whether or not updates are likely to happen, that is, or whether it's set in concrete). Readers, read 'em or don't read 'em, your choice.
If you're wondering where you might post the first 3 sentences of a short story for feedback, see here: Post The First Three Sentences of your Short Story in Short Fiction forum.
There's also the Hook me in 200 words or less thread in Science Fiction | Fantasy SYW (password=vista). Other SYW genre sub-forums also have their own 200 words threads, go check ’em out.
-Derek
This can be seen as a continuation of the Post the First Three Sentences of your Novel thread in Novels forum, which you should take a peek at because amerigina lays out the rules pretty well in the 1st post.
You're invited to post the first 3 sentences of your WIP here for critique.*
I like amergina's take on what such a writing sample might consist of:
Gripping first sentence that captures your attention. Stunning second sentence that acts as a bridge. Amazing third sentence that causes your heart to pound and fingers itch to turn that page, but alas, there is no more.
Re-read that quote, and see if you can tinker with your darling opening lines to improve them before you post. Take your time, this isn't a race. If they're already perfect then that's great!
By posting, you're inviting readers to critique your writing sample. That means they will say what they think. You might not receive the deafening applause you're expecting so wear your adult panties, please. And remember the immortal words of Conan: That which does not kill us, makes us stronger.
Readers/critiquers, take it easy, this is not a Viking raid. Yes I know you're trying to help but there are diplomatic alternatives to being so helpy that the author feels they're being bludgeoned to death. Try to remember you were a sensitive soul yourself, once.
Have fun -- "fun" being the keyword here.
* An addendum to cover posting samples from works that have already been published. This came up in Page 24 of this thread. If you're doing this, please make sure readers know the lines are from a published work. I personally would have an expectation that author might be willing to update said published work (if possible) should readers deliver some zing suggestions, but that's just me, clearly it's the author's decision. But maybe this could also be made clear (whether or not updates are likely to happen, that is, or whether it's set in concrete). Readers, read 'em or don't read 'em, your choice.
If you're wondering where you might post the first 3 sentences of a short story for feedback, see here: Post The First Three Sentences of your Short Story in Short Fiction forum.
There's also the Hook me in 200 words or less thread in Science Fiction | Fantasy SYW (password=vista). Other SYW genre sub-forums also have their own 200 words threads, go check ’em out.
-Derek
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