Hello there,
I've not done this before (though I have attempted - in my infancy as a beta-reader - to help others) but I need some feedback, particularly initially, on the beginning. I'm not certain if I begin too early or too late in the story, but it requires reading the first three chapters to ascertain this.
I'm still deciding whether this is YA or not, but it is a science fiction novel. The kind with cyborgs, rebels, ships, strange weapons, and a dose of dystopia (but it takes place on earth).
I'm happy to partner up as a fellow beta too, and give feedback as well on your writing, but a seasoned beta reader or two would be appreciated as well.
Thank you.
I've not done this before (though I have attempted - in my infancy as a beta-reader - to help others) but I need some feedback, particularly initially, on the beginning. I'm not certain if I begin too early or too late in the story, but it requires reading the first three chapters to ascertain this.
I'm still deciding whether this is YA or not, but it is a science fiction novel. The kind with cyborgs, rebels, ships, strange weapons, and a dose of dystopia (but it takes place on earth).
I'm happy to partner up as a fellow beta too, and give feedback as well on your writing, but a seasoned beta reader or two would be appreciated as well.
Thank you.
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