So I'm having a little difficulty knowing the best way to present conversations between two characters (I've never taken any lit or writing classes past the required English 101/102 - engineering is my trade). I've been using quotations to go between characters, but it seems a little weird when the scene is from one character's point of view, like it changes to the other character's point of view during the conversation. Is that normal?
Example:
Dr. Aven nodded, "I can totally understand your trepidation Councilor Lawsen, but I hope you can see that my purpose in asking for more funding is based on the security of our planet." The councilor shook her head, "I don't see what this has to do with the planet as a whole doctor. You are basing your claims of alien warships on shady footage of a private satellite that the council doesn't even have proof exists. Besides that, we all know how Mr. Serenth ended up. So unless you are trying to get first priority onto the next boat to the asylum..." She didn't even have to finish, he knew what she was up to.
This scene is from Dr. Aven's point of view, but I can't seem to get it to seem completely that way. Is it in the ending of the conversation? By wrapping the conversation in text that shows it is Dr. Aven's pov, does that smooth it over? Just looking for some help on this as it bothers me a little bit. Thanks.
Example:
Dr. Aven nodded, "I can totally understand your trepidation Councilor Lawsen, but I hope you can see that my purpose in asking for more funding is based on the security of our planet." The councilor shook her head, "I don't see what this has to do with the planet as a whole doctor. You are basing your claims of alien warships on shady footage of a private satellite that the council doesn't even have proof exists. Besides that, we all know how Mr. Serenth ended up. So unless you are trying to get first priority onto the next boat to the asylum..." She didn't even have to finish, he knew what she was up to.
This scene is from Dr. Aven's point of view, but I can't seem to get it to seem completely that way. Is it in the ending of the conversation? By wrapping the conversation in text that shows it is Dr. Aven's pov, does that smooth it over? Just looking for some help on this as it bothers me a little bit. Thanks.