I'm re-writing my first western. The thing is, how do I write as if I were Jenny Lee; her point of view? I'm not a woman. The same old story line of which she is raped by the men who kill her husband. Who in turn, becomes an outlaw. I'm not going for extensive detail about the rape. I am applying to "PG"-rated western action and dialogue think back to the 1970s Westerns. Any suggestions? Also should it start with action first or slow build up?