Does this web comic work?

WormHeart · Jul 9, 2015

Hi all.

I've just finished my first web comic which is basically a horror themed fabel tackling a serious issue.

Now I usually write my stuff in Danish, but this is a "silent" web comic with almost no text and as such I think it works no matter the language of the reader.

Before I begin to promote it in English, it would be nice to have some actual non-Danes take a look and tell me if it works or not.

Cultural differences might throw a wrench into the reading of the story.

Could you take a look HERE and tell me what you think?

Michael

Maggie Maxwell · Jul 10, 2015

If I'm understanding it right, the "monster" is alcoholism or addiction in general, which the hero struggles with his whole life thanks to his father's monster? If so, very easy to understand, because I had the idea as soon as the Dad and his monster show up. A universal story in all languages, or none at all. You present the concept clearly, fantastic art, too! I love your style. And if that's not the idea... well, the art's still fantastic. :greenie

WormHeart · Jul 12, 2015

Thank you!

Yes, you got it right. Seems to work then. Great.

WormHeart

PeteMC · Jul 22, 2015

Just stumbled on this thread - excellent comic mate!

Vegetarian Cannibal · Jul 22, 2015

It wasn't difficult to understand at all. Relatable, too. Loved the art.

Damian · Aug 22, 2015

That was impressive both in story telling and in pictorial representation as well.

Does this web comic work?

WormHeart

Dual class author / nightguard

Maggie Maxwell

Making Einstein cry since 1994

WormHeart

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PeteMC

@PeteMC666

Vegetarian Cannibal

I eat clowns.

Damian

The Lord Rahl