Hi
My character is in the Navy and is about to leave on his first deployment. This will be the epilogue of my book. I’ve been researching for hours and want to make sure I get every last detail right. So here is the way I’ll set up the scene and if anyone can please tell me if I made any errors, I’ll really appreciate it. Thanks.
He says goodbye to some of his friends before getting in the car with his family and girlfriend. They drive for a few hours to the port where the ship will deploy from. Once there, he will say goodbye to his family, kiss his girlfriend, and then he will get on the ship (with his bag). Is all this correct? Do the sailors need to report to the ship ahead of time before their families arrive to wish them goodbye? Am I missing anything?
Again, thanks!
My character is in the Navy and is about to leave on his first deployment. This will be the epilogue of my book. I’ve been researching for hours and want to make sure I get every last detail right. So here is the way I’ll set up the scene and if anyone can please tell me if I made any errors, I’ll really appreciate it. Thanks.
He says goodbye to some of his friends before getting in the car with his family and girlfriend. They drive for a few hours to the port where the ship will deploy from. Once there, he will say goodbye to his family, kiss his girlfriend, and then he will get on the ship (with his bag). Is all this correct? Do the sailors need to report to the ship ahead of time before their families arrive to wish them goodbye? Am I missing anything?
Again, thanks!