She woke up… and it was all a dream!
My story doesn’t end like this, really it doesn’t, but I’m worried that people will feel a little unsatisfied with my ending, or perhaps just hurl the book across the room.
My MC has three main goals: she wants to rescue her boyfriend, her sister, and get them all back home safely.
During the course of the novel, her boyfriend becomes the leader of the armies of hell and her sister dies (sort of). Also a lot of other things happen: character growth, world building, more novely things, also a little messing with minds, what’s real and what isn’t?
Going along the messing with minds vein, the end of the novel is a bit…odd. The MC’s last remaining goal is realised, and she gets sent back home, but there’s something off about it. It isn’t destroyed like it was at the start of the novel, and no one seems to remember her sister, or her boyfriend, or that the town was even attacked in the first place. She tries to tell people, but everyone thinks she’s following in her mother’s footsteps and has gone a bit loopy. So instead of her mother being the strange village girl full of crazy stories, it’s the MC who arrives back from her adventures with these odd tales that no one believes. The novel kind of does a full circle.
I hope it’s clear to the reader that everything did happen, but the MC is so confused by this point that she is easily swayed by the idea that this reality could be her reality, and the story ends with a hint that she starts to accept this, and thinks she’s just finally flipped.
It’s…I really don’t want people to feel like I’ve cheated them or anything.
There are more books *hopefully*, so it’s all cleared up in the end.
I’ve been agonising over this ending for a while, I just wanted to test the waters and see how much this would bother people before I got stuck into writing it.
So… would it? Would it bother you? How much? Enough to completely boycott anything else I write?
Thanks for helping
My story doesn’t end like this, really it doesn’t, but I’m worried that people will feel a little unsatisfied with my ending, or perhaps just hurl the book across the room.
My MC has three main goals: she wants to rescue her boyfriend, her sister, and get them all back home safely.
During the course of the novel, her boyfriend becomes the leader of the armies of hell and her sister dies (sort of). Also a lot of other things happen: character growth, world building, more novely things, also a little messing with minds, what’s real and what isn’t?
Going along the messing with minds vein, the end of the novel is a bit…odd. The MC’s last remaining goal is realised, and she gets sent back home, but there’s something off about it. It isn’t destroyed like it was at the start of the novel, and no one seems to remember her sister, or her boyfriend, or that the town was even attacked in the first place. She tries to tell people, but everyone thinks she’s following in her mother’s footsteps and has gone a bit loopy. So instead of her mother being the strange village girl full of crazy stories, it’s the MC who arrives back from her adventures with these odd tales that no one believes. The novel kind of does a full circle.
I hope it’s clear to the reader that everything did happen, but the MC is so confused by this point that she is easily swayed by the idea that this reality could be her reality, and the story ends with a hint that she starts to accept this, and thinks she’s just finally flipped.
It’s…I really don’t want people to feel like I’ve cheated them or anything.
There are more books *hopefully*, so it’s all cleared up in the end.
I’ve been agonising over this ending for a while, I just wanted to test the waters and see how much this would bother people before I got stuck into writing it.
So… would it? Would it bother you? How much? Enough to completely boycott anything else I write?
Thanks for helping