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[FONT="]Hi everyone!! It’s me with the Mafia boss again!! :[/FONT]
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[FONT="]This time I have to write a scene where the wife of my Mafia boss gets shot in the upper leg, during a chase. The gunman is careful enough not to hit the femur artery because he wants her alive. He captures her and then he asks her guards to tell him where her husband hides. They tell him that they don’t know so he responds that he will let her die from bleeding, till they disclose his hideout. A 10 minutes chit-chat between the gunman and her guards follows and finally the woman passes out in the hands of the gunman. Later on she manages to get in the Hospital (in Class III Hemorrhage Shock)[/FONT] and survives.
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[FONT="]So here is my question: “Is the 10 minute time between the gunshot and the faint correct”?[/FONT]
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[FONT="]I chose to write that the bullet hit her great saphenous vein (because I read that venous bleeding is considerably slower and more moderate[/FONT]) but I still have no idea if I’m right or wrong. I'd preferred a gunshot wound on the thigh but do you thing that it’s more appropriate to choose a lower leg wound so that it could be less life threatened?
[FONT="]Thank you in advance [/FONT]
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[FONT="]This time I have to write a scene where the wife of my Mafia boss gets shot in the upper leg, during a chase. The gunman is careful enough not to hit the femur artery because he wants her alive. He captures her and then he asks her guards to tell him where her husband hides. They tell him that they don’t know so he responds that he will let her die from bleeding, till they disclose his hideout. A 10 minutes chit-chat between the gunman and her guards follows and finally the woman passes out in the hands of the gunman. Later on she manages to get in the Hospital (in Class III Hemorrhage Shock)[/FONT] and survives.
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[FONT="]So here is my question: “Is the 10 minute time between the gunshot and the faint correct”?[/FONT]
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[FONT="]I chose to write that the bullet hit her great saphenous vein (because I read that venous bleeding is considerably slower and more moderate[/FONT]) but I still have no idea if I’m right or wrong. I'd preferred a gunshot wound on the thigh but do you thing that it’s more appropriate to choose a lower leg wound so that it could be less life threatened?
[FONT="]Thank you in advance [/FONT]
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