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mentor would be appreciated

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LaVerneRoss

I have never had one, so this is new to me. I write various kinds of books. Western, horror, romance, action/adventure. :love For me writing is like having to breath, must do it every day. need some advice how to make my books better, sellable.
LaVerne
 

mammamaia

you can email me any time, laverne!

 
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MrAngelwithnowings

need mentor bigtime

Hi,

I'm attempting to write my first book..an autobiography.

After reading some posts here I went back and re-edited it.

It still looks kind of...plain

Its powerful but it doesnt have descriptive words or that "flow" does it matter as much as the content if i'm writing my past?

its choppy when i read it. maybe its just me
 

mammamaia

Re: need mentor bigtime

if you'd like some one-on-one help with this, angelman, drop me a line and we'll see if we click, ok?

love and hugs, maia
[see contact info on website below]
 
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