inspiration to exercise the mind

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jonblondyn

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in this thread, thought we could post something inspirational.

here's my post for the day -

enjoy -

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innovation is a form of light.
power to the piston.
momentous attraction.
innovation is demonstration –
experimentation of benevolent order.
it is spirit, yearning onward –
to examine the wires, the glass, the bulb –
to discover what may come between them.
innovation is electricity.
nearly tangible.
enlightening.
it keeps the world turning and business rolling –
the pencil at the arcitects pad, firing rafters and frames across the page.
and one day rocked unto bedrock foundation.

with foundation as creation around us, inspire your fascination.

inspire innovation.

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blondyn.com
 

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Roses are red,
violets are blue,
and you should have read the warnings about posting this stuff,
both in the threads you started and in the PMs. As those warning were not a bluff.

My poems are crap as well.
But, I suppose, if you're at the bottom, the only way is up. <---Inspirational part.
 

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i'm angry at someone today, so the positive part of it would be...

flames of anger burn my patience
fuels the thoughts with violent hate
narrowed eyes, closed fists

direct this fire to create wonders
mould the iron or warm the hut
channelize is the word
a sword is just a tool
 

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there's no rule. if you want to post your work for critique then there are syw forums and there is a poetry forum for critique for poetry. if you want to critique anyone's work, just write it. but this forum is mostly for fun.
 

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This is not a place I moderate, but in general, we critique only at SYW. I'm sure if the moderators here want it some other way, they'll step in and say so.

Maryn, in her unofficial capacity
 

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I see. Sorry for derailing your thread, jonblondyn -- I had just discovered this forum and didn't think of PM-ing the mod with my question.

Please continue.
 
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