Quote Originally Posted by Paul Lamb View Post
Kelly Shepherd did not belong in a forest. He knew it, and he was pretty sure the forest knew it too. He came from lanes and alleys, streets and avenues.
Reads smoothly enough, no reason for me not to read on, though the story could be anything and could go anywhere. I guess I'm curious as to what he's doing here, if got here of his own free will.

-Derek