REVISED BELOW IN POST #1593: Tentative Title: SLINGSHOT; Genre: Urban Fantasy; Estimated Word Count: 5,000 words.
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Joon Ki softened his gaze so that his classmates would not notice the way he glared at Timur. All quarter he’d wondered how he could break up Timur and Ice without getting killed. Timur’s incredible strength and speed, his ability to fly and generate lasers in his eyes, made Joon Ki’s ability to manipulate words seem insignificant in comparison.
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Joon Ki softened his gaze so that his classmates would not notice the way he glared at Timur. All quarter he’d wondered how he could break up Timur and Ice without getting killed. Timur’s incredible strength and speed, his ability to fly and generate lasers in his eyes, made Joon Ki’s ability to manipulate words seem insignificant in comparison.
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